Hey Ed!
Great job buddy! The pictures are outstanding as is the procedure. The captions give all the necessary information without being verbose. You've stayed within the scope of the tutorial, which is
the proper procedure for cleaning the carbs. As far as listing all the part numbers and tools, some of those parts (like the idle mixture screw O-rings) don't have part numbers. That's why we get the right stuff form Robert Barr (
http://cycleorings.com). I know trying to document
everything is virtually impossible. Just look at the factory service manuals. As big as those are, they still don't cover everything to everyone's satisfaction.
I have a few suggestions. The file size is a little large. I've found that when creating the PDF you can set the jpeg compression to 30% or 40% and the pictures still look just fine and the file size will be much more download friendly.
You might want to mention in slide #24 that the fuel inlet "T" is between carbs #2 and #3, to stay consistent with the other fuel tubes you mentioned.
Yes, the caption contrast on many slides makes it difficult to read. Perhaps use a little darker highlight, especially on the white backgrounds, or a different font color. These are the slides in particular that I thought needed more contrast on the captions; 6, 26, 30, 33, 34, 35, 38, 39, 40, 44, 48, 50, 51, 52, 55, 57, 58, 59, 60, 62, 63, 67, and 68.
I really liked how you addressed the different choke assemblies between the earlier and later models. I also liked the float height adjustment procedures you documented. You touched on all the necessary related material without getting sidetracked. It is a very thorough document.
I recognized those little serving bowls in slide #41. My wife has a set in the cupboard and serves desserts in them. I should probably not use them to clean my carbs.
Thank you for all your hard work. I apologize if any of the above is redundant.
All the best to you and yours,
Cliff